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Happymann's avatar

This is a good piece and love the contrast of two worlds and the ties both has and there unified

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank you. I had trouble straddling the line of realism and personal fantasy. But I wanted to show that contrast and make the party feel more sexually charged for the story.

cheeky_hubby's avatar

loving just how real you are making this....as this is what makes it hot. Loved it

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank you ❤️ I had to do a more thorough rewrite to make it feel that way

andreas's avatar

Hello dear Ginza, yes, sometimes the abysses are deep and barely visible. But you have courage—just take it slow. And as you—or rather, Lumi—realized, everyone wants a piece of the newcomer, especially when she looks like Lumi. 😍 After all, at a party full of men, she might not have gotten away quite so unscathed. Have fun with the next part of the story, and tell Lumi to take care of herself and not to rush things. 🌹 🌹 🌹 💖 👍🏼 😘

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank you Andreas ❤️ I like exploring the tension and danger of situations like these.

Gerard Roll's avatar

That got me so hot… Imagining myself as Lumi & feeling all those “wanting” hands reaching out to touch me here, there… Everywhere ♥️🥰😜♥️. I probably would’ve surrendered to their touch far earlier ♥️♥️♥️

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank you ❤️ I really wanted to capture that overwhelming feeling 🥵

Gerard Roll's avatar

I had the image floating through my mind & then once I closed my eyes & pictured myself in that position that Lumi was in, a “certain part” of me came to life & all I can say is, I’m glad my wife was home because she was in a similar mood that I was in ♥️😏🥰♥️