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kierra bliss's avatar

All I’m gonna say is I’m ENTHRALLED 🥵

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thankss 😊 glad it has you hooked!

Samantha E.'s avatar

Hmmm, I like this... I love stories that develop more and more - even though we're left wanting and wet, I can see where you'd want to make us that way. The climax will lift us, cure our tensions and sway our hips like any good, hot girl would. I'm looking forward to more exploring, feeling and to see what's cumming (hee hee!) !! <3 Great work! I really enjoy your writing!

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank you soo much for the kind words. Its starting slow, but believe me the pay off will be well worth it 🥵

Samantha E.'s avatar

The wait will be worth it, I am sure of it! You do great work and it's exciting to see it grow and develop!

DrVic65's avatar

This is getting really good. Looking forward to more.

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank you ❤️ its gonna be a little slower, so this just introduces where Lumi's at mentally at the beginning of the story

Dove Harper's avatar

I really like the images! It adds to it a lot. And your descriptions of the characters. Can’t wait to read more ~ DH 🕊️❤️

Happymann's avatar

Very sweet and great! 😊 You are very talented!

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank youu ❤️ I appreciate it!

andreas's avatar

Hello Ginza, a great story, a great start. I'm really looking forward to the continuation. Thank you. 😍 ❤️ 😍 😍 😍

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thanks Andreas for all your support 🙏 Im sure youll enjoy where this story is headed ❤️

Richard Steele's avatar

Another piece leaving us wanting more already!!

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thanks 😊 this will be a slow burn, but the payoff will be 🔥

Chuck's avatar

This is so hot 🔥! Please keep them coming I love your writing!!

Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank you ❤️ just getting started!

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Ginza Li 🖤's avatar

Thank you ❤️ more to come!